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A failed Flash Animator seeking new interests
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Latest Flash Reviews
With the amount of length put into this movie, I can see why this took as long as it did, the movie seems pretty interesting, although the artwork is kinda odd, it seems to have a form of expression to it, can't really describe it. This appears to the start of something that has a lot of potential.
My only opinion on what should be improved on is the pacing of the movie, some scenes between the middle and the ending seemed to go a bit too fast to get a full grip of what was going on, so maybe decreasing the frame rate slightly at moments might make it better, just my opinon though.
Hope too see more.
Author's Response:
Actually it's the denouement of something that may have a lot of potential. This art style was great, but it inflates the file size pretty badly. I was fighting pretty hard just to keep this animation under 30 MB. I'd like to try an art style of BG's similar to Icycle--that video game that's on the front page right now. I found that especially attractive.
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I'm not really sure what this was about, but from what I can tell it seems like a Christmas poem. Although I admit its cute, this seems more like a digital picture book or slide show. Did you make the artwork yourself? For some reason I feel as though I've seen it somwhere before, but since I have no real grounds to go on, I won't deduct points for that.
Anyway, its ok, and maybe you could include a bit more of a explanation about your movie in the comments next time.
Merry Christmas.
Author's Response:
Its my first try =).
I only made it like this because it was my first try and i dont know how to move parts etc...Thats my next step =).
Thanks to everyone who commented on my flash...I know its kinda poor but i guess i did do a really good job with my 1st ever flash things =)
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"Not sure how to rate this... don't like the ending"
Although this is badass... I'm not sure if the custom sprites/effects were created by you or not... (if they were I'd give a higher score for creativity) I enjoyed the fight scene but after the next chatting part, that music part seemed to drag on... and on.... and on... then as a reward for my waiting, I get a "the end"... I understand that this is a demo, but if your going to do something like that in the full version, you should work on shortening it or adding in the credits so we can get a clear impression that its over.
Can't wait to see the full version.
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Latest Audio Reviews
This is certainly an out of the ordinary song, however some or most of the notes seem to have a bit of a static like sound to them... I'm not sure if that's intentional or not.. but it really takes away from the song in my opinion.
Anyway you get points for originality.. but dang those high pitch notes hurt my ears...
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"Nice, but might need an adjustment or two"
This song is great , this would probably be awesome to listen too during a specific boss fight in a turn based RPG game. however my only compliant is those techno loops in 0:14 and 0:40-0:60 seem a bit too powerful, maybe tuning them down slightly might fix that. Also it seems as though the song has sudden drops and spikes in volume.
Author's Response:
Yeah i see what you mean. il get right on it! thanks for the feedback!
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The beat this song has is quite catchy, I could see it being used in one of those chase/escape scenes in movies, however if you made it a bit more intense it could probably be used for a fight scene.
Author's Response:
that track is actually more goa-trance and less for a flash scene, but i get what ur saying..ty for teh review :]
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